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Wednesday, April 21, 2010

FreeVerse Poem - On My Mind




Every once in awhile, I try my poetic hand at something a little erotic.










On My Mind

Haven’t seen you yet

But I know your heady scent

The smooth texture of your hands



Your presence lingers, hovers

Weighs deliciously on my mind
Absorbs my fleeting thoughts

Keeps chills at bay


Warmth wafts through me
Like heated lotion

Balm for incessant need
Whispers for my fantasies



Haven’t seen you yet

But baby, I’ve been inside your skin

And you, in mine.



~quidrock 2005


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8 comments:

Kelly said...

You did a fine job with this, Quid. I really like it!

raven said...

Quid,

I am with Kelly here!

A sensual yet very subtle
poem!

****
Further, I remember that
you shared "Hibicus Near The Pond"
at PS, and this chain of Haiku remains exquisite and beautiful.

Raven

raven said...

Quid,

Excuse the silly typo, I meant

"Hibiscus Near The Pond"

Raven

Valerie said...

Very good one. Was it a cold day when you wrote this? I like most:

"Keeps chills at bay

Warmth wafts through me
Like heated lotion

Balm for incessant need
Whispers for my fantasies"

Marion said...

Smokin'!!!! Love it!! xoxo

quid said...

Thank you, ladies. I've got one more erotic poem in my poem drawer this month. It's definitely more literal. Wait and see it I "brave" it by posting.

quid

Jenners said...

Oh ... wow! Hose me off! This was wonderful!

And you had asked for a link to my zine on your comment earlier this week ... but there isn't really one. It was a newsletter that I used to publish for my friends back in the day (before widespread computer use) and I have only my photocopies!

quid said...

Jenners.... sorry the zine is no longer "alive", but I love your blog, anyway. At least you have it in your treasure trove!

quid